Hi- The jokes were ok but what is the reasoning of the EU nations? Why do they need reasoning? The have portugal. And that is more of a list of using. and less reasons. Policy was boring . EU PARLAMENT STRUCTURES AND PARTIES. I daydream of watching Cspan while reading that. Was their a sex or a drug joke in there that I missed? Not meaning to be mean but funny is a factor.
To be fair you are working with the EU... what is funny about the EU? It is presented well and formatical and clycalpedic. Like the EU itself. It is a tough concept to work with.
Prose and formatting:
prose and format looked ok to my sherly Temple eyes.
you had 9 images. fair ones. Last one on the fifth riech did make me smirk at the idea of "try and try again". EUPS image made me look
away. Graphs and ballon charts are boring to begin with without attempting to interpret sardonic ones. And the feeling to look away is only re-enforced by the peeing angel, I don't want to look at a nasty peeing angel fountain. I doubt many do. Then throw a chart at me and yeah. I look to the right.
M Alot was not covered. Drug use. sexual perceptions,educational values, methods of travel IE the italians use boats and scooters the swiss ride bikes, the geography lessons only amuse people that like geopraphy and even then... No mention about their secert super weapon at C.E.R.N. No inclusion of their place in all the other unions of the world. Reasoning could of been an invented reason for forming the EU because it still makes no bloody sense to this texan, the list of every nation using every other nation was long to read. And that mort fellow leading the whole shabang, I seen all sorts of much funnier pictures of him online.
This is a tough sell from the get go. I am not sure how to put a shine on it. One could talk of how pissed off merkle is about the US sying on us all and the propased plans of listening back. Maybe explain why norigians were exiled to the north for being crazy (its not too soon to make that joke, go for it) With Bearasconi their is all kinds of room. He is their media owner propagandist president. And he stunk at it. Thats why he has no passport and is looking at doing time. Make fun of it. and the Danish? what about the Danes?