Please proof read. First article I have wrote so yes, won't be all shiny.DeeJaay Batoushai (talk) 15:46, December 24, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry I have never heard of Don Bosco. If this is made up then it isn't funny. If it is a satire of an actual Institute of Don Bosco then I do not get the joke. Make a wiki reference. Lots of random facts do not make it funny. Don't just think something is funny if its get swearing, homosexuality and sex references in it. This may appeal to US readers but not British ones.
Yet again seems to me like random jibberish. Just using terrorists' names and a president's name at the end does not make it funny.
Prose and formatting:
Structure is alright.
Good images. Good captions to go with them.
Your images and structure are there. Now add satirical humour.