||pretty weak stuff.
||you might have a good idea waaay down there somewhere, maybe...
|Prose and formatting:
||none of the sections are more than a few lines long.
||no images. at least throw in pics of FSM and dawkins.
||i'm not even sure if you're knocking religion, FSM, or dawkins
||your time on ICU seems to be up, and i'm pretty sure i'd be against keeping this article, in its current state. it needs tons of work to acheive redeeming value. more on who dawkins is, what FSM is, other people with problems with the disproof. i think in a week i'll be looking at this article's corpse in the huff log, but i invite you to prove me wrong.
||-- 22:11, 27 November 2007 (UTC)