this piece of shit was written at post-4:00 AM when I just wanted to look at pictures of Pam Grier and not study for my final. keep that in mind when reviewing it, "it" being this utter utter piece of shit. --TKFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK 17:04, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
Over-emphasis on Brubeck's whiteness without much premise. Being a jazz fan, I am aware that there were white jazz players and white jazz band leaders going way back into the Big Band era and prior. David Brubeck is not special, and not "the first" to play jazz, which in my mind would give a premise to a lot of what is written. Much of the rest is just poor taste.
Playing the race card too much. You need to diversify.
Prose and formatting:
Much of the humour is too repetitive.
Images are OK.
As a general rule, your humor needs to spread out into other areas. Brubeck is a musician: maybe pay more attention to that.
Needs an overhaul, and lots of care and attention to survive.