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Pilkster 16:13, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Humour: 4 This was a hodgepodge of random words and syllables that somehow formed Star-Wars related sentences. You made some mildly humorous remarks but the article was mostly too incoherent to be funny.
Concept: 4 A vague part of the Star Wars universe would be good for a Star Wars wiki. By limiting your audience to fairly intense fans of Star Wars, you've made it so most people wouldn't get it anyway. Your
Prose and formatting: 5 You have crammed as many jokes and references into every paragraph as possible, making it unreadable and uncompelling. Focus of refining one section of the joke and expanding that to one paragraph.
Images: 6 Basic but fair.
Miscellaneous: 4.5
Final Score: 23.5 Honestly, this page fell flat. It reeked of both Star Wars fanboy idiocy and Family Guy reference humour. You have potential (your timing is pretty good and you seem to have an eye for what COULD be funny) but this certainly isnt a glowing example of that potential.
Reviewer: Hankjones 14:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
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