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I like the page it is now. User:Bobr does not. IS there a way we can resolve it? 216.252.78.43 22:48, 25 July 2008 (UTC)

I guarantee a pee. [03:24, 30 July 2008 (UTC)]Choose a fate of epic proportions. One Two Three Four Five Six and Seven
Hi!
I, Methamphetamine, am here to pee on your article. If you can, please let me pee. Thank you, and good night.
Humour: 1 I'm Puerto Rican American, so I cannot understand communist humor. The preceding sentence makes no sense with this article. Because not even a communist with a real sense of humor won't get this article. In fact(may be harsh), this has the humor of War and Peace. Lowest Score
Concept: 4.1 The concept, I think, was made to be a Wikipedia article with a dry sense of humor. I really think you didn't try to do that. You had a very good communist parody idea, but you really couldn't execute it well. Try it again to make it much better next time.
Prose and formatting: 7 There are typos in there introduction, and others here and there. YOU ALSO LACK EMPHASIS, A PROBLEM WITH MOST ARTICLES I PEE ON. If you have emphasis, it makes your article wittier and funnier, if in the right hands. You get a 7, though. Highest Score!
Images: 3.2 First of all, THERE ARE WAY TOO MANY IMAGES. Sorry. About 3-5 pics are enough for this article. Second of all, none of them were really funny, except for the giant one, but it wastes space. Honestly, make some funnier images. Hitler Barney isn't funny.
Miscellaneous: 3.8 Avg'd
Final Score: 19.1 My preview box says 19, and the guidelines say this article has No Redeeming Value. Unless you don't really want your article to go down that road, rewrite the whole thing and then come back to Pee Review. I agree with this Bobr guy. Look! An acronym: HTBFANJS. Read it twice. Please. This is Jasper, signing off.
Reviewer: [04:36, 30 July 2008 (UTC)]This is Joe Walsh's DJ Jasper's signature. ProfileTalkASADeath Row: Latest
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