Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Cult of Apple

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edit Cult of Apple

Review me. No pictures yet, but they'll come, and I'm sure they'll be appropriately hilarious.

For now, review it on the merits of the text. I'm sure there will be minor improvements and other adjustments when I get around to editing this again tomorrow.

Sir Groovester | Contributions | Talk Page 08:58, 3 August 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 7 A good laugh, this should have been written a long time ago.
Concept: 8 The concept is great, extremely funny, and should have been done years ago.
Prose and formatting: 10 Your formatting is much better than anyone elses around this dump, and your grammer and spelling are good to.
Images: 2 I gave you the two in hopes that you'd get some high quality images and if you don't, this article may die.
Miscellaneous: (6.8) Just give it some more images, insert more funny juice, but mainly it's the images that I've got a problem with.
Final Score: 32 Images. YOU VERY MUCH NEED IMAGES. I'm sorry if the review is crap, but this is my first time at one of these. Find a good Potatochopper, or photochop yourself some, because this article needs some Images, STAT.
Reviewer: --TheGreatLiquidFox 13:43, 4 August 2008 (UTC)
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