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An article made by tons of IPs and accidental users (including me). I cleaned it up a bit and I put it here. I need a masochists who could review it and:

  • Article needs to be long, I don't want to hear "needs to be shorter". Article is as long as cricket game is.
  • Article is long and can't be divided into several smaller articles. Otherwise it will lose its charm.

PoliszSir Ptok-BentonicznyPisz tutaj KUN 21:08, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Humour: 6 Some great ideas here, perhaps a re-read might help develop some of the prose humour a bit more. Excellent use of the cricketing terms & their definitions though.
Concept: 10 Very thoroughly thought through and good execution.
Prose and formatting: 6 Some of the prose, particularly the introduction, contains a few mis-spellings & missed words. Also, possibly some over-use of the ellipsis (...). Easy enough to correct though.
Images: 8 Plently of images & very good captions.
Miscellaneous: 7.5 Good overall effort.
Final Score: 37.5 Nice article. Only real areas to look at are spelling & grammar, and develop the introduction humour a little more. Overall a very enjoyable read!
Reviewer: Good Old Ted - LOB - What ho!
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