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|Humour:||1.7||First section-3 Urgh.. The first sentance wasn't terrible but still it sounds like some guy has got really fed up with his home town and decided to make a page about it. One trouble is that s not funny. What I would do-
Geography- 0 One Line? Either think of more content or get rid of it. Something about is surrounded by asylem-seekers camps and other 'undesirables'.
Culture 2- same critisism as first section
Transport- 3 Started very well but at the third sentance it just got boring. Granted, it's not random, but is is worse; just boring.
List- 0.5 Lists are devilish. Especially Boring lists. Heck, even if yo'd included ton of in-jokes (don't though) it would of been funnier. Though, I did like Stings entry.
If you think I'm being harsh, I think I'm being pretty fair actually.
|Concept:||3.5||The idea of being really right-wing has been tried and tested and I would of given you hgher, but often you just fizzled out and said straght facts. Possibly you may of misinterpreted the meaning of being Funny and Not just stupid.|
|Prose and formatting:||5||Acceptable spelling and grammer, but appaling Layout- A list, No intro, one entry only 1 page. I've put your first section as intro, but I'll leave you to it.|
|Images:||0||n/a Come on you have loads of scope for this. A picture of a foreign person, maybe. (With a caption of something like 'Grrr! BloodyImmagrants! He wants to take our jobs, murder our children and errr.. take our jobs.)|
|Miscellaneous:||1||* Far too many red links- get rid of them.
|Final Score:||11.2||Sorry, but this teeters into VFD. I'm going to put in there and if it survives it's gunna need a serious rewrite|
|Reviewer:||--I like cheese 17:21, 12 November 2008 (UTC)|