Thank you for your time --NewYinzer66 04:18, 16 November 2007 (UTC)
Not all that funny.
The concept seems to have little promise for improvement. Animae is already less than serious, so animae parodies often don't go over well. This one in particular isn't all that much fun.
Prose and formatting:
You need more tact and more jokes that make sense to the general public.
No images. It needs really good images (not to make you think it has hope though, sorry)
Nothing here I can find to accredit this.
I think your writing is OK, but you need a better topic and formatting skills. If you need ideas for topics to write about, drop me a message on mis talk page. Also, you might like to read How to be funny and not just stupid. Cheers, and don't take it too hard, please.