Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Clay Weiss

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===Clay Weiss=== Adopted Pothead Caveman

Oscar Wilde is a young man discovering his new qualities in life. Although he may seem very intelligent, he has notorious traits that relate to those of a caveman's. Once in Dublin, Ireland at a run down barn near town another man by the name of Chuck Norris free styled da shit outta Oscars's ass! The poor guy couldn't defend himself against these ferocious lyrics, so he used his caveman grunt to attempt to fend Brogan off. Nevertheless Norris manipulated Oscar's grunts into insults that would be used back at the inferior neanderthal.

Clay's best friend Cody smokes weed, yes

Nateweiss20 03:35, 10 December 2008 (UTC)

I can't find the article, even after searching for it. I hoping the above is a summary, and not the article under pee review. Either way, from the above summary, it looks like you might be probably are running afoul of our cyber-bulling and/or vanity policies. Please see Uncyclopedia:Vanity_Policies for rules about vanity; we don't want to hear about your friends and much they suck and/or are gay. As a rule, never write articles about your friends, school mates, neighbors, teachers, or any other completely non-notable people.--Mnbvcxz 17:55, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
Concept: 0 The above is Vanity. As Solomon saith in Ecc. 1:1 "Vanity of vanities, saith the Preacher, vanity of vanities; all is vanity."
Internet memes inserted in place of real names to protect the innocent.

What you wrote would be classified as vanity, specifically cyber bullying. This in not acceptable anywhere on this site and may result in you getting banned.

I don't think there is anything savable in the above article, and its way way way to short. I'm mainly doing this review to get it off the queue and explain the rules about vanity.

You might want to look at Uncyclopedia:Vanity Policies for more information about rules on vanity.
Prose and Formatting: 3 No wiki formatting, and written in the pee review and not in mainspace. However, you get points for not be totally illiterate. There isn't much to talk about here, you might want to look at Beginner's Guide for how to format articles. Once you have a decent one in mainspace or userspace, then you can put that on pee review to get some tips. As a rule, you can generally find out how to do formatting by looking at the code in other articles.
Images: 0 No images= 0 in this category. Every article should have at least one image in an article.
Humour: 1 Nobody cares about your friends or relatives. See HTBFANJS for some hints on how to right funny articles, and Best of for a list of good articles.
Improvability Score: 1 Your article really can't be improved. There is very little here, and the bulk of it is vanity. I'd suggest starting a new article in mainspace or userspace.
Final Score: 5 NO VANITY!!!! also, write articles in mainspace or userspace. Bt putting in the article's name, it will create a pee review that links to it. Do not write your articles in pee review.
Reviewer: --Mnbvcxz 21:56, 13 December 2008 (UTC)
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