Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Carnies

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I'd just like some feedback on how to make this more awesome. The section that I'm least happy with is "Typical Carnie Games" but I'm not sure how I could make it better. Any suggestions would be appreciated. Corsair 19:59, 9 August 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 6 Needs more humour
Concept: 10 Original
Prose and formatting: 6 The main problem with this article is that it is not long enough
Images: 8 Good images although they didn't add humour
Miscellaneous: 7 I liked the 'Avoiding a Carnie Encounter' section
Final Score: 37 It is a decent article but the sections lack length
Reviewer: -- 11:14, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
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