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edit Canberra University Netball Team (C.U.N.T)

Yes well despite the suggestive name, this is a really good article. I like it alot and apart from being suggestive it has other good parts. --Moneke 01:06, 7 October 2007 (UTC)

From one noob to another, let's get started. --  Le Cejak <-> 19:17, 29 October 2007 (UTC)
Humour: 4 *AHEM* Well, that was uh, suggestive /me awkwardly adjusts tie. You realize that penis jokes (sex jokes, whatever) are looked on as very stupid, right? (-2 for penises). Also, it's random (-1) and listy (-2). Get rid of randomness. Here's a way to detect it: when I look at the title, do I expect to see the names of all these random people pop up, or do I expect 1000 words of penis jokes? (-1) because I'm not from Australia (is that where Canberra is?) and you didn't really clear it up to those of us who are foreigners.
Concept: 5 PENIS! LOLZ! ...seriously.
Prose and formatting: 7 Adequate formatting, I would say.
Images: 8 A little above adequate pictures. I'm never good at giving advice on pictures.
Miscellaneous: 6 avg of all the other scores. Also, move the article to "Canberra University Netball Team" and forget that "CUNT" thing at the end.
Final Score: 30 Uh, I guess I would keep working on this maybe a little bit more. Is it featurable? Not in it's current concept. Call me if you have any suggestions on where to shove my review!
Reviewer:   Le Cejak <-> 19:17, 29 October 2007 (UTC)
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