Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Canada II

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edit Canada II

Somebody else already reviewed this but they were rather dickish and uninformative so I'm putting it up for review again. Thanks :D

Thatguyoverthere1 00:09, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Reviewing

Projectmayhem666-has stamped this article for review.

Consider your article UNDER REVIEW bwahahaha!!
Projectmayhem666


Ha! America's Hat =] --The preceding signed comment was added by Projectmayhem666 (talk • contribs). 12:48, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

This is going to be short but sweet, I'm really over worked so... --The preceding signed comment was added by Projectmayhem666 (talk • contribs). 12:50, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 5 It's a good idea, the dropping of canadian singers is a good shot, however the history section makes no sense, why is it a bunch of soviet nazis? the History section needs a complete rewrite and a good look at HTBFANJS is required here. Random drivvel is rarely good. The other sections are good but could do with a few tweaks here and there.
Concept: 5 Average idea, will need to be implemented better to be something special.
Prose and formatting: 3 The wording isn't very good. "Canada II went into extreme disrepair as nobody ever figured that anybody would want another Canada, even Canadians" try not to jargon the readers and try to write good and stuff :).
Images: 2 All the images are less than par expect for the flag and coat of arms, I then chuckled.
Miscellaneous: 4 Averaged
Final Score: 19 Needs work and stuff. My 10 minute break is up RUN RUN RUN!
Reviewer: --The preceding signed comment was added by Projectmayhem666 (talk • contribs). 12:50, 8 May 2009 (UTC)
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