Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Can I be an admin please?

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edit Can I be an admin please?

Humour: 7.5 The jokes, while very funny, don't have much variety.The big, bold text at the end doesn't help, either.Personally, it should get some "spring cleaning".HTBFANJS could help this ina big way!
Concept: 8.5 The concept is a fresh restart of that annoying, old question.Very well done, but shouldn't be so straight-forward.
Prose and formatting: 5 I'm sorry,but it's horrible in some places.Mostly it's ok, but that big,BOLD text at the end is immature and unfunny.Some red links, ok, but paragraph layout looks like a grue attacked it.ALSO, spelling errors are frequent!As for the voice, it speaks for itself.
Images: 7 First, the "admin medication" box image is worth some big lulz.The other image is ok, too.It just might need a couple more.Not mmuch more to say, really.
Miscellaneous: 7 Pretty average score, if not a little low.
Final Score: 35 The whole page is pretty funny, honestly, but it really needs some work.Maybe a rewrite would be helpful.
Reviewer: --Bad Shroom 18:29, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
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