Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Caboose (Red vs. Blue)

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An article i did that took me a while to release. link here. Indepth. Thanks! Eye 4WILLExplode 3YOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 11:21, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 6 Well... So short article about such a fascinating character. Caboose is stupid but well,,, you put that much presshure one teh missphelingsh and his sthupidity taht it smees is't a summary of a character. But well written, with images... but humor is quite infantile. There is too many gay referrences. You should be more creative man. Invent something unusual, not just obvious jokes.
Concept: 7 Decent concept. Does it need a genius to summary funny, retarded character in such a way? No. It's quite obvious.
Prose and formatting: 7 Ok with the misspellings but...mhmhm... Oh well, let it be. Decent formating of the short article. But last part is ...bleh. I didn't like it. Too retarded. It went over boundary of so retarded that it became dull. Make it 'shorter or change it to be actually funny.
Images: 7 I guess you couldn't find better images. Well, then decent. That's all I can say. 2 pictures are enough for the article but they are not rocking, you now (but the first one is better than the second; try to change the second if possible, if not keep it as it is).
Miscellaneous: 6.8 It's a decent article. Not great, not bad but not worth featuring I think.
Final Score: 33.8 score says everything but it's not 42
Reviewer: PoliszSir Ptok-BentonicznyPisz tutaj KUN 18:38, December 24, 2009 (UTC)
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