Saw someone mentioned something about a mathematical formula that explains alcohol in relation to parties. I took the concept and ran with it. This review doesn't need to be incredibly in-depth, I'm more looking for ideas to expand the page and improve it through addition. Thanks! --SirSF13(Talk)GUNWotMRotMFBotMVFHSKMaj.ΥΣΣ00:59 EST 11 April, 2010
It's not very in-depth, but should give you an idea. Joefoxon 11:23, April 11, 2010 (UTC)
I found the article fun, but there's a difference between fun and funny. It is still entertaining though, it is one of those articles that doesn't need to be funny.
It is a fantastic idea and it works! It's brilliant.
Prose and formatting:
Well constructed and describes the topic well. Not much really needs to be changed here.
There are only pictures, but the length of the article means you can get away with it. The captions could be made funnier though.
Averaged using pee.
Not much really needs to be changed in this article. It's not really funny, but I still enjoyed reading it.