Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Bostjan Nachbar

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Humour: 4 The humour is random , without cohesion. This is probably because the concept is not very interesting (Ex-basketball player makes a smash hit candy bar)
Concept: 3 See above
Prose and formatting: 4 Try to develop and maintain a consistent 'voice'
Images: 4 I cannot imagine what images would be helpful, given the concept.
Miscellaneous: 5 Drop the lists and the quotes.
Final Score: 20 You put a lot of work into this. Try starting with a hilarious concept, and then everything becomes a lot easier.
Reviewer: Pieface 12:54, 7 December 2007 (UTC)
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