Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Boris Yeltsin (2nd)

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edit Boris Yeltsin

Taken a second look, does anyone want to add to these two reviews? I'm a newer user, so my scores may not match the views of this site... Le Man de Jump OhOne 19:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

  • Submitted on behalf of InMooseWeTrust who would like someone to take a second look. --ChiefjusticePS2 17:59, April 11, 2010 (UTC)
  • Come on, no one wants to pee review this? InMooseWeTrust 20:15, April 16, 2010 (UTC)
    • I'll try this. ~Scriptsiggy.JPGTelephonesig Star Starsig Kidneysig 08:20, Apr 25, 2010
Sorry, lost my reviewing muse. Somebody else please take this. ~Scriptsiggy.JPGTelephonesig Star Starsig Kidneysig 13:02, Apr 25, 2010
Humour: 9 The article was very witty and clever, especially within the presidency part. However, you did repeat on the alcohol joke a bit much. It worked out okay in this smaller article - and I understand Yeltsin was a heavy drinker - but if the article was any longer I might have lost my patience with it. Make your jokes a tad bit more varied next time, and I will give it a ten.
Concept: 8 Again, this relates to the redundancy of the alcohol joke. It was funny portraying Yeltsin as "the only president with a lower approval rating than alcohol level", but again, make sure your jokes are slightly more varied.
Prose and formatting: 10 You had this weird issue with the formatting on the Presidency section, where the words nearly overlapped with the pictures, but this might be a flaw with the Wikipedia formatting in general, so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt. Other than that, the article was very well done grammar-wise, and it even appeared you gave it a nice spellcheck before you finished. This part was very good.
Images: 9 It appeared that you got most of your images off the web and added captions to them. While most people (including me) do this, edit a few more images. The captions were still very good, though.
Miscellaneous: 9 Your average score, it appears that it is right where it should be. Very good.
Final Score: 45 This article was very good, just remember in the future that you should vary your jokes a little.
Reviewer: Le Man de Jump OhOne 19:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)
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