Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Booger King

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I did some work, and how is it?? When could it survive VFH?--Sir Manforman 15:21, 30 September 2007 (UTC)

Booger King

Humour:	7	At first I thought it was just really gross, but then I relized it was spoofing the health of fast-food(My guess). The random chunks about Ronald Mcdonald creating the resturaunts was pretty useless and not very funny. Besides, what would you expect from an article called "Booger King"? Fans of toilet humo(u)r might love this one. *Vomit*
Concept:	8	I'd just expect randomness from an article titled Booger King, but you did very well with the toilet humo(u)r.
Prose and formatting:	3	You need to expand it a little more, maybe a part about the "Healthy Menu", or dare answer the question to what horrible secrets the "Childrens Menu" might hold. What would be waiting for you at the "Drive-Thru"?
Images:	0	None?
Miscellaneous:	10	Not a whole lot else I need to mention.
Final Score:	28	This is alright, grossed me out majorly, but still made me chuckle afterwards. Just expand it a little.
Reviewer:	--Narf, the Wonder Puppy/I support Global Warming and I'm 100% proud of it! 01:09, 3 October 2007 (UTC)

There was an image. I don't see how it is "toilet humor", it doesn't mention bathrooms anywhere. Anyways, thanks for your thoughts and I'll re-sumbit sometime soon--Sir Manforman 21:00, 3 October 2007 (UTC)

I can't tell if you were joking or not, but toilet humor is anything which involves disgusting things such as vomit, feces, boogers, or other icky stuff. – Sir Skullthumper, MD (criticize • writings • formspring) 23:35 Oct 03, 2007

Oh, I get it. I guess I was being literate--Sir Manforman 23:36, 3 October 2007 (UTC)

Gah! Indent properly! Also, pie. – Sir Skullthumper, MD (criticize • writings • formspring) 23:38 Oct 03, 2007