Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Bomb Shelter
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just finished up another one, i'm on a roll! seriously though, i need ideas for what to add, if you think this might be a little short. please go as in-depth as the length will allow. 17:43, 20 August 2008 (UTC)
|Concept:||10||Loving the idea, and the execution was well thought out. Congratulations.|
|Prose and formatting:||8||The only potential problem I see here is the spacing of the images. If at all possible see if you could put just a little more space between them, so the text doesn't get cut off on both sides.|
|Images:||6||This was my view of a problem area.
The number of pictures compared to the length of the article is good, however some don't seem right for the article. First off your picture of Alfred Nobel isn't actually Mr. Nobel, its Einstein (unless they look very similar, and I didn't realize that), also the caption to that picture doesn't add very much to the article, if anything.
Also the last picture doesn't seem to be focused very well, it may just be my eyes, or it may be because it had to be shrunk down, I don't know, but you could probably get a better picture for it (and it doesn't even have any bombs in it!)
|Final Score:||40.8375||This has potential to be a featured article in my opinion. Just fix up the images and then you should be in the clear.|
|Reviewer:||--23:08, 6 September 2008 (UTC)|