I thought it was funny within the concept of the story. At least it didn't go off in
any weird tangents and so stuck with the subject.
The idea was good and took a new take on the old Boer/Bore/Boar jokes.
Prose and formatting:
Very little was needed on the prose except for one major change recommended by this reviewer. Some of the formatting had to be fixed but that wasn't major.
Images were funny - lots of Scottish kilt jokes I noticed. Perhaps only the AWB photo of Boers might offend. I would have chosen a contemporary image of say farmers or perhaps Smuts,Botha or Kruger. So may be some images of Victorian generals as well.
The writer accepted changes recommended by myself and I think improved the article.