Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Boer War

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edit Boer War

By Sog1970. 18:23, 4 June 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 9 I thought it was funny within the concept of the story. At least it didn't go off in

any weird tangents and so stuck with the subject.

Concept: 9 The idea was good and took a new take on the old Boer/Bore/Boar jokes.
Prose and formatting: 7 Very little was needed on the prose except for one major change recommended by this reviewer. Some of the formatting had to be fixed but that wasn't major.
Images: 8 Images were funny - lots of Scottish kilt jokes I noticed. Perhaps only the AWB photo of Boers might offend. I would have chosen a contemporary image of say farmers or perhaps Smuts,Botha or Kruger. So may be some images of Victorian generals as well.
Miscellaneous: 9 The writer accepted changes recommended by myself and I think improved the article.
Final Score: 42 39
Reviewer: --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate). 05:56, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
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