Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Boars

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I know red links are looked down upon, but the ones in this article are there for either a) comedic purposes or b) opportunity for me to create other articles tied to this one. I am excited to see what everyone thinks about this. --Crazydrunkenelf 21:50, 19 November 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 7 Ok some of it was hilarious, very hilarious. The history section was not to the standards of the rest of the article.
Concept: 8 Yeah I suppose we should have one on boars..
Prose and formatting: 7 Had a few brief problems with spelling, and also I do not understand. Why put red links for humour, they really did not make me laugh...
Images: 10 Ok, they were all pretty funny, kudos to you
Miscellaneous: 8 Quite good, but why did you not mention Obelix from the Asterix books! On another note maybe not Oscar Wilde saying the quotes. I cannot imagine him saying that.
Final Score: 40 Rather good. Fix up the spelling and the History section AND mention Obilix and it would be rather good.
Reviewer: --I like cheese 20:16, 20 November 2007 (UTC)

Great feedback. I guess the comedic purpose for the red link i was referring to was the one for the East Kenyian Shovel Snouted Boar. I see comedy in it because it is obviously a fake boar. I suppose it is a little too dry to generate laughter. I will take them out as i can see your point. As for the bipeds and quadrupeds i will leave them because i plan to create articles for those. I have never heard of Obelix before so that is why i never mentioned him. I did a quick check on "the site that must not be named" and i can see how he could fit into my article very well. I am new to this site so i may not completely get the whole oscar wilde thing, i merely mentioned him to show up on the wildeizms page for more exposure and also to fit into the format of other successful articles. As i can think of any, i will be adding content and making adjustments to this article. This is not the end of Boars! --Crazydrunkenelf 20:50, 20 November 2007 (UTC)

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