WarlockLord 21:15, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
||It was pretty funny execution, and definitely qualifies as satire.
||Only problem is, it's not exactly original. Still funny.
|Prose and formatting:
||Could use a few touches to improve flow, but it's generally good.
||Effective in communicating the point. You could just put them right next to each other, though, if you wanted, that would be pretty much the same except a lot more blunt.
||You ace the miscellaneous portion of the test! Because I could nothing. You could change the title of the page to have both words be capital, though. You can just move it.
||It's a good and funny, if not entirely original, satrical bit.
||--Mrmonkey72 21:28, 22 July 2008 (UTC)