An Unwehr rewrite. Review away. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 17:18, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
- Don't worry Professor, I'll handle this article! There's no I in RAPE (lol contribs) 18:16 Aug 19, 2009 18:16, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
||It was a bit of a one-joke topic. Although it was quite a witty play on words, I feel like the entire article could've just been condensed down to a one-liner.
||Like I said before, this was a very clever idea. No improvement needed here.
|Prose and formatting:
||Well-written overall. Not many grammar or spelling errors, and the article formatting wasn't at all hard on the eyes.
||Although there weren't many, the images you did use were both humorous and relevant to the text. Could use more images, though.
||Just work on having more than one continuous joke, and add more images.
||There's no I in RAPE (lol contribs) 18:33 Aug 19, 2009 18:33, 19 August 2009 (UTC)