Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Bible Smoking

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Humour: 5 It's listy. Put some paragraphs in there.
Concept: 7 I think it's above average in terms of the concept. However, it's "gimmicky", so remember that will only get you so far in terms of number of jokes.
Prose and formatting: 4 The page looks wonky, like it was made in half an hour. Put some thought into where paragraphs go.
Images: 5 The images are weird. Why is there that little tiny image on the left? Only the first image is necessary unless you can find something hilarious related to this subject.
Miscellaneous: 5 Like, it REALLY is just a list. Find something to say.
Final Score: 26 Overall it's below average right now. Like with ANY page, make up a history of the subject. Call it a sport or something: where is it played? I discovered this page with my crime template, so I figured I might as well review it. Take a look at my article, Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Uncyclopedia Names Man of the Year.
Reviewer:   Le Cejak <-> 20:14, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
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