||It's listy. Put some paragraphs in there.
||I think it's above average in terms of the concept. However, it's "gimmicky", so remember that will only get you so far in terms of number of jokes.
|Prose and formatting:
||The page looks wonky, like it was made in half an hour. Put some thought into where paragraphs go.
||The images are weird. Why is there that little tiny image on the left? Only the first image is necessary unless you can find something hilarious related to this subject.
||Like, it REALLY is just a list. Find something to say.
||Overall it's below average right now. Like with ANY page, make up a history of the subject. Call it a sport or something: where is it played? I discovered this page with my crime template, so I figured I might as well review it. Take a look at my article, Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Uncyclopedia Names Man of the Year.
|| • <-> 20:14, 11 October 2007 (UTC)