Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Beyonce Knowles

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edit Beyonce Knowles 21:27, 30 June 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 0 Please read HTBFANJS, uncyclopedia's guide to humour writing. Random humour is not funny, especially when you've been subjected to it hundreds of times already. This article exhibits most of the "don'ts" listed in the article, most notably, famous parents for no apparent reason.
Concept: 1 I guess the parentage idea is at least followed through to the end.

What you need is a concept that says something about Beyonce. Her famous backside would be the most obvious inspiration. Read her wikipedia article, which gives a good basis of what to write about.

Prose and formatting: 4 The spelling and grammar are largely fine. The formatting, however, is nonexistent. Read some other articles on the site and use their formatting for things like sections and bullet points.

It is also very annoying to have so many words written in ALL CAPS. If something is funny, then you don't have to meddle with the case to show it off.

Images: 0 No images. I don't think IPs can actually upload images; you'd need an account for that. There is this, already uploaded by someone else.
Miscellaneous: 1.25 Averaged
Final Score: 6.25 Sorry for being so harsh, but as it stands, this article is a candidate for deletion and really needs a complete overhaul.
Reviewer: -- 15Mickey20 (talk to Mickey)  15:31, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
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