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CajekHi!
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And Whatever Else Comes Out Of Him
Humour: 1.7 avg of all sections
  • [2] Intro

Random, and short.

  • [3] History

I couldn't even read all of this section! Is this a real place, or are you pulling my leg? It's just so... long and boring! It make me sad.

  • [1] Noteworthy Events

A random, random, random list.

  • [2] Population and Trends

O___O

  • [2] Terms and Phrases

>___<

  • [1] Great People from Bensham

X___X

  • [1] Great People not from Bensham

AAAAAHHHHHH! I'M BEING HARSH RIGHT NOW!

Concept: 3 Random locales? Please no. Sit down and think of an idea before you begin writing. At least you had the balls to come to pee review and get, uh, pissed on.
Prose and formatting: 4 It's mostly just a list and complete fuck-ass randomness.
Images: 5 Well, there WAS a picture in there...
Miscellaneous: 3.4 avg'd
Final Score: 17.1 Try again, this is not doing too well. You know what would be good? If you got rid of 99% of the randomness. You have to start with a solid idea, okay? You need a story to tell. Hope I wasn't a jackass...
Reviewer:   Le Cejak <-> Dec 1, 01:34
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