||The first section made me feel mildly amused, but it quickly degraded.
||Not original at all. There are hundreds of articles like this, and all of them are crap.
|Prose and formatting:
||It doesn't quite make my eyes bleed, but it would be a good idea to look at the standard prose of most good articles before writing your own.
||No images, and it could do with one or two.
||Meh. Nothing too original here.
||—Comrade Pongo (V2) GS Implementor (Talk | Contribs | Award) 13:14, 20 October 2007 (UTC)