||The stuff actually "about" Battle Royale shows some promise, but the opening "wacky" quotes, the random non-sequiturs, "emos!", and "Chuck Norris kicks some ass hell yeah!!" references REALLY work against you. I'd recommend focusing more on the surreality/bizarreness of the movie itself, and not the other crazy stuff you can toss in.
||Battle Royale was made for a parody.
|Prose and formatting:
||Formatted just fine, but man is this article short. Really, really short. Could you flesh it out?
||Images have little or nothing to do with the subject.
||You seem to have fallen for a vein of what we call "Fool's Humor". You're going to have to dig a lot deeper to get to the real, valuable stuff, but it's there. See: UN:HTBFANJS
||--Mejwell 14:06, 31 July 2007 (UTC)