Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Bass

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Humour: 5 I don't really find this very funny. It doesn't seem encyclopedia-like. It reminds me a bit of Uncyclopedia is the Worst. To say it quickly, it starts as random whining. Next, it is a bit less random, with a bit less whining. Then it changes to talking about how the bass is good. The pictures are not that great either, but hey, at least the article is written in a pretty funny way. First person, where that person is talking about himself and other bassists, in a pretty funny way. It could be much better, though.
Concept: 8 This could easily be a good article, if a bit more work is put in to it. The idea of having a bassist talk about how bad bassists are, and why, is a great idea. If more work is put in, it could be great.
Prose and formatting: 6 This is well-written, except for the introduction. A bit of a mess there. Fortunately, that is a small part of the article.

Formatting is pretty good, but that GO AWAY image I don't find is good for the formatting. Could be fixed easily, though.

Images: 5 I find the images to not be funny on their own, with them looking like average photos. The captions are good, even with them depending on the article's text to understand them. Could use some work.
Miscellaneous: 6 Average of all other scores.
Final Score: 30 Needs work, but could easily be a great article.
Reviewer: User:Uncyclopedian/sig
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