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Review this or I shall smite thee with a barbed bell. --Oh Nut.Nutwhore 23:36, 9 September 2007 (UTC)


Humour: 5 Funny but not very. Has no real funny concept, just random stuff happening.
Concept: 5 Only one real joke, the rest is just random stupid stuff.
Prose and formatting: 2 Appalling formatting, reads like a badly written story. Look at a wiki article to see how to format.
Images: 7 The image of the bell was good, needs more though.
Miscellaneous: 3 The last bit was just random.
Final Score: 22 Not particularly funny or clever, needs alot of work.
Reviewer: Moneke
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