Review this or I shall smite thee with a barbed bell. --Oh Nut. 23:36, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
||Funny but not very. Has no real funny concept, just random stuff happening.
||Only one real joke, the rest is just random stupid stuff.
|Prose and formatting:
||Appalling formatting, reads like a badly written story. Look at a wiki article to see how to format.
||The image of the bell was good, needs more though.
||The last bit was just random.
||Not particularly funny or clever, needs alot of work.