My first article in quite a while (by my standards), though that'll happen when you try to write stuff in between college classes. I think this is pretty good, though some feedback is always nice. Review away. —UnführerGuildyRittervonGuildensternenstein 19:25, September 4, 2009 (UTC)
I don't know how to work this review, but I know a perfect article when I read one. I can't think of a single thing to improve. So I'm just going to nominate the article, by what little power is invested in me. Hope that's OK. Anyone else can write a review if they disagree. Cheers--Funnybony 17:30, September 5, 2009 (UTC)