Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Avro Arrow

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edit Avro Arrow

This needs review so it can be a BIG article. NEKO.ca 02:45, 12 June 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 7 It is witty, but it begins to get a bit like pointless drivel after a while. Keep an eye on that.
Concept: 8 Very original. However, definitely expand upon it a bit.
Prose and formatting: 7 Mostly okay, but be sure to run spell check.
Images: 7 The first one is okay, but you definitely need to add more. I would also reconsider the first after having found some more suitable ones, as "PWN3D!" is not the most humourous comment.
Miscellaneous: 6.5 Please please please expand upon it! We don't need short articles in these here parts! If I were you, I would consider sporking from here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Avro_arrow
Final Score: 35.5 Okay, but definitely expand upon it A LOT! Make sure it is humourous. Always refer to How To Be Funny and Not Just Stupid.
Reviewer: Vanaelin 00:52, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
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