This needs review so it can be a BIG article. NEKO.ca 02:45, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
||It is witty, but it begins to get a bit like pointless drivel after a while. Keep an eye on that.
||Very original. However, definitely expand upon it a bit.
|Prose and formatting:
||Mostly okay, but be sure to run spell check.
||The first one is okay, but you definitely need to add more. I would also reconsider the first after having found some more suitable ones, as "PWN3D!" is not the most humourous comment.
||Please please please expand upon it! We don't need short articles in these here parts! If I were you, I would consider sporking from here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Avro_arrow
||Okay, but definitely expand upon it A LOT! Make sure it is humourous. Always refer to How To Be Funny and Not Just Stupid.
||Vanaelin 00:52, 19 June 2007 (UTC)