Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Attack of the Japanese Monsters

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edit Attack of the Japanese Monsters

This review is good except for all the insults! Jeez! Calm down, NX!   Le Cejak <-> (Jan 3) 16:34
Humour: 4 I just can't help it. An imaginary game is so 2006 and is so not funny. We haved moved on to better more humorous articles and jokes.
Concept: 5 For a second there I thought it was a movie but apparently not, as shown above an imaginary game is not funny but if you had the right theme perhaps.
Prose and formatting: 3 Usages of Bold, Images, and Lists make this article unappealing to the eye and the way you positioned them. It's completly ugly.
Images: 5 Seemingly random images.
Miscellaneous: 4.3 No comment.
Final Score: 21.3 See below comment.
Reviewer: NXWave 11:33, 3 January 2008 (UTC)

When I first read your article. It bought me back to the times of 2006 when Uncyclopedia was in a daze of horrid articles and imaginary made up junk. The way you've written the article isn't funny and it just seems to drag on and on with no end in site. Most of the jokes just come up on other Uncyclopedia articles but the way you implemented them do not make me laugh. The gameplay, unneeded lists and conspiries mostly make up for what seems to be a dry article, I suggest a rewrite of the article entirely. But yeah, I really wanted to see Attack of the Japanese Monsters: The Movie. --NXWave 11:33, 3 January 2008 (UTC)

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