This is my first edit at uncyclopedia (still unfinished) - a rewrite of "Atheism(religion)", not to be confused with "Atheism". I'd appreciate any input/ideas. I know that images are missing, and that the whole article needs to be "spiced up", so to speak.
AdrianMarcato 07:30, 29 November 2008 (UTC)
It may just be the mood I'm in, but I neither raughed nor roosed. However, it's efficiently lacking in the fields of inside jokes and other such cancer. I personally love cancer, though, so I feel even more conflicted. Basically, I have no idea what's going on. I may just not be a good judge of what's happening today. I think I chuckled a few times, but then I went into a temporary lapse and immediately forgot what for.
This is where I get to be objective! The existing Atheist site already refers to it as a religion, so to have another religion one after it, it should be.... something at least different if not better than what's already there, yes? D:
Prose and formatting:
You don't have to bold every proper noun, my good sir. ^^;;. Nothing else lept out at me, however.
You loose here. Only a few really add to what's going on... There are too many near the end, and they get the post all jumbled around like it's being gangraped from every direction. Abuse that return key or take some out.
I still don't know what's going on.
Basically, I'm not sure why this is here, or what it's doing here, or whether or not I should be laughing. And that's not usually good.