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hahahaha, oh man what the hell was I thinking?? --  Le Cejak <-> 01:30, 3 November 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 8 Wow. That's pretty much all I can say. Extremely bizarre, but hilarious in its own...rather warped way. I'd say the "workbook" section needs the most work...do you plan on making little "comments" for every single one of the elements in the list? If not, then you should probably remove the ones without comments, as they don't add anything humorous; they just make the list look ugly and empty.
Concept: 9 Where the hell did this idea come from?
Prose and formatting: 9 No typos or anything.
Images: 6 Your one picture is pretty good, but instead of using multiple pictures you just use the same picture three times. Another one would help. This article could warrant plenty of good picture ideas...perhaps a nuclear explosion, with the teacher character admiring the symmetry?
Miscellaneous: 7 As I said before, try shortening the list or filling it in with more content. Also, maybe you could flush out the "introduction" paragraph a bit more before getting into the individual "experiments". Perhaps a new version of the scientific method which encorporates meditation and weed-smoking instead of hypothesizing and experimenting?
Final Score: 39 Awesome article. I'm still shaking my head in amused bewilderment. Good work!
Reviewer: -- 21:26, 11 November 2007 (UTC) FUCK! Uncyclopedia spontaneously logged me out! That IP was me, anyway :) --THE 21:28, 11 November 2007 (UTC)
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