Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Arthur Treacher

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MrCleveland 04:34, 14 February 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 1 This article is very brief. There is little humour in it. The main jokes are the overuse of chicken jokes which are nonsensial and not funny. I suggest expanding and rewriting. Perhaps make it ranty like some of our best articles are or think of something on your own. Just make sure whatever you do is funny and follows HTBFANJS.
Concept: 4 The concept of a biography is alright but it in no way is great. The execution is lacking.
Prose and formatting: 4 It's not very good, though I've seen worse. You get points for headers, properly used images. However, this article has more red links than blue. That said, remove the red links. I noticed this article has several spelling errors, once completed, add {{Proofread}} to the article
Images: 6 There's one image. It's suitable to the article IMO. Only complaint about this section, there's only one image. That's obviously due to the article being short. That said, once expanded, add another image or two.
Miscellaneous: 2 This article is not good enough for the ICU tag to be removed yet.
Final Score: 17 This article is brief and not funny. It needs to be rewritten, expanded, and it needs formatting help. This has the potential, just keeping working on it.
Reviewer: --Æ 17:01, 16 February 2008 (EST)

It is now dead, but if anyone thinks about recurring this page, let me know.

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