||Not too bad, I laughed out loud a few times (particularly when I didn't see things coming). This article does that a decent bit.
||Eeeehhhh... the "harmless-animal-turned-psycho-killer" bit has been done to death.
|Prose and formatting:
||You really need to break up the paragraphs and such on the article a bit less. Each section has only a sentence or two, whereas more encyclopedic articles (to be whorely a bit, The Cheat) can have several sentences to a section, but not as many sections to begin with. This path is usually preferable.
||Lots of good images here, but perhaps too many. Also, there is formatting other than "thumb|right" available. You could get more room by shifting images to the left instead.
||I LIEK ARMADILLOES
||So yeah, decent article. Could use a bit of work still, but the humour is there, and HUMOUR IS HALF THE BATTLE.
||Ж Kalir, Crazy Indie Gamer (missile ponies for everyone!) 20:00, 7 January 2008 (UTC)