Fresh out of the oven, it's a steamroll of an inferior work. I'm attempting VFH material here.-- 23:02, 2 January 2009 (UTC)
There are some golden lines in this article, and some entertaining cracks at the old testament. However, a lot of the text sounds too factual. The introduction up 'till the bit about "Moses & Sons" sounds like a Wikipedia article. Simply put, it's not silly enough. Funniest section would have to be "don't mess with the box", "what's really in the box?" is a little weak.
The concept is original and has the potential to be very funny.
Prose and formatting:
Nothing wrong with the format, it all sounds very encyclopedia-like. Only I'm not sure why the first letter of every paragraph is in bold?
The images are good quality, if a bit small, and the captions merit a snort of laughter.
A fairly average article, with the potential to make it to featured if you work hard.
Like I said, smooth out the teething problems, and it'll do really well. Good luck.