So this used to be one of PLS projects from last summer. I finally finished it like 5 months after the deadline ended. Anywa, feedback would be super appreciated. thanks! --Sf130137 23 JAN 2011
Missed out on some real potential. Could've dedicated an entire section ranting about how "He asks too many questions" as well has examples of him applying terrible usage of deductive reasoning (that for which he was well known for). Other than that it was pretty darn funny!
Famous historical figure. Loads of Potential one-liners. What more is there to say?
Prose and formatting:
perfect, easily readable, pictures not in the way, etc.
The images were hilarious! The only problem is that maybe there are too few? Some of the best articles have lots of pictures to back up the text, and they do a good job of adding hilarity to the subject matter.
Pretty well written, well executed article. Bravo for making my day that much more hilarious.
Well done! Loved the article, just personally think you missed out a tad on potential. Other than that the article was just downright FANTASTIC. Bravo, Bravo.