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OK, this is an honest review. It won't be pretty, but it is not meant maliciously.

Humour: 2 Sorry, didn't really find any.
Concept: 4 The concept of a polar opposite to any competition is vaguely intriguing, but the way you've approached it just seems to be an excuse to be a bit rude about women you consider ugly. You may or may not be right about them, but it's not a great concept for an article.
Prose and formatting: 4 Not much prose on display. The title seems like a spelling mistake (Surely it should be Anti-Miss World? At least that would make sense, I came to the article vaguely expecting something about an alien world called Antimiss or something). Some of the sentences need tidying up for readability But formatting is OK.
Images: 4 There are some, at least. But one's a black square with a not very good comment, and the other's the Oprahsaurus. They don't really bring much to the article.
Miscellaneous: 4 I suppose if this was approached properly, and given some work, a decent article could be wrung from it, but it would need a fresh start - maybe from a viewpoint that actively celebrates the body ugly instead of the body beautiful? Staying away from lazily naming women you don't fancy and outlining the principles of such a contest could be interesting, I suppose.
Final Score: 18 Sorry, in the current state, I don't see much value in this article. If you think it is something we really need, I'd recommend drastic surgery, cutting most of it out and starting pretty well from scratch.
Reviewer: --Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 16:10, 2 October 2007 (UTC)


I'll add the usual caveat to one of my reviews: other opinions are available, this is just mine. Please don't take it personally! Feel free to ignore everything above, take your idea, make it shine, and then stick your tongue out at me when it's a shining example of all that's great about this site, if that's what you want to do.

Whatever you do, just try to make it funny. Good luck! --Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 16:10, 2 October 2007 (UTC)

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