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Greek mythology and a little bit of astronomy. -- Kip > Talk Works Puzzle Potato Dry Brush CUN Icons-flag-us 03:49, Jun. 1, 2012

Got it. -Grammarnazilogo Fe+3 AlFe+2
Humour: 7 It is an okay little article. Short, sweet and to the point. Here's my dissection of it...
  • Intro=True to reality with a not so subtle reference thrown in- good.
  • Body
  • Myth=It appears as though you took the original myth and ran it through the Ministry of Truth i.e. the basic story was modified as to make it humorous. Not bad I guess (see concepts). It all seems to be in order except for the final bit- Hercules freed Promethius during his 12 trials... just thought I'd point that out.
  • Astronomy=Good although I believe it would make for the #1 all time best apocalypse movie don't you think?? Mentioning the sci-fi series is a bit out of place here though... Perhaps a new section could be created or it could be removed all-together?
  • Pictures=Make a good ending/conclusion to article-see below.
Concept: 8.7 See Ministry of Truth reference above. Unfortunately doing a close to reality parody of mythology locks one into only being able to do so much without straying from reality. I suppose that the waters could be muddied a bit more in order to squeeze every last bit of length for jokes out of the concept.
Prose and formatting: 10 I didn't notice anything outstanding that needed to be changed as far as formatting, sentence structure, or grammar issues. Good.
Images: 10 Images integrated nicely plus the gallery at the end was memorable. I like how you took unmodified pictures that only would normally be viewed for certain reasons and made them humorous with short captions. The Dilbert picture to wrap it up made for an interesting surprise. Good.
Miscellaneous: 8.9 Average of scores...whoop-de-do!
Final Score: 44.6 Great start! I look forward to reading after any future updates :D
Reviewer: Grammarnazilogo Fe+3 AlFe+2
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