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|Humour:||7||It is an okay little article. Short, sweet and to the point. Here's my dissection of it...
|Concept:||8.7||See Ministry of Truth reference above. Unfortunately doing a close to reality parody of mythology locks one into only being able to do so much without straying from reality. I suppose that the waters could be muddied a bit more in order to squeeze every last bit of length for jokes out of the concept.|
|Prose and formatting:||10||I didn't notice anything outstanding that needed to be changed as far as formatting, sentence structure, or grammar issues. Good.|
|Images:||10||Images integrated nicely plus the gallery at the end was memorable. I like how you took unmodified pictures that only would normally be viewed for certain reasons and made them humorous with short captions. The Dilbert picture to wrap it up made for an interesting surprise. Good.|
|Miscellaneous:||8.9||Average of scores...whoop-de-do!|
|Final Score:||44.6||Great start! I look forward to reading after any future updates :D|