Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Amulet of Yendor (quick)
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edit Amulet of Yendor
Skate1168 19:21, 1 February 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 2 | Should have more info for those who are not familiar with the game of Rogue. Possibly add link to a parody game of Rogue, or comparison to the game of Zork. Also needs some humorous internal links, and more jokes about the game. |
| Concept: | 7 | Has potential if the above issue is addressed. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | A bit short for an encyclopedic article. Could use a bit more material, needs internal links to other articles. |
| Images: | 9 | Images are good. Could use some jokes about the images though. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | Possibly add more jokes about how difficult the game is to win etc. |
| Final Score: | 30 | This article is currently in ICU for low humor value - needs jokes emphasizing the differences (or lack thereof) compared to other 80s/ASCII adventure games, jokes about the monsters, etc. |
| Reviewer: | -- Simsilikesims(♀UN) Talk here. 15:07, 2 February 2009 (UTC) | |
- Thank you very much for reviewing my article. :D
--Skate1168 15:38, 2 February 2009 (UTC)
