Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Amulet of Yendor (quick)

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edit Amulet of Yendor

Skate1168 19:21, 1 February 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 2 Should have more info for those who are not familiar with the game of Rogue. Possibly add link to a parody game of Rogue, or comparison to the game of Zork. Also needs some humorous internal links, and more jokes about the game.
Concept: 7 Has potential if the above issue is addressed.
Prose and formatting: 6 A bit short for an encyclopedic article. Could use a bit more material, needs internal links to other articles.
Images: 9 Images are good. Could use some jokes about the images though.
Miscellaneous: 6 Possibly add more jokes about how difficult the game is to win etc.
Final Score: 30 This article is currently in ICU for low humor value - needs jokes emphasizing the differences (or lack thereof) compared to other 80s/ASCII adventure games, jokes about the monsters, etc.
Reviewer: -- Simsilikesims(♀GUN) Talk here. 15:07, 2 February 2009 (UTC)

Thank you very much for reviewing my article. :D

--Skate1168 15:38, 2 February 2009 (UTC)

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