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Hear me, oh, ye mighty Editors of Uncyclopedia! For I Call upon your Awesome Powers for the Review of this magnum opus! Bestow your Blessings upon It, and together We shall March toward Heaven! ----most Humble Acolyte of Humor, Radioactive afikomen 06:37, 26 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 7 cute, funny in places... I think the "eradication" stuff comes on way too heavy though. More objective "observational" tone would underscore the dry humor. Also, while food/fat is certainly worthy of being in here (grin), think about branching out a little- child-bearing, PTAs, Junior League, suburban sprawl... all topics worthy of being picked on!
Concept: 8 good concept, and definitely needs to be in Uncyclopedia. Well organized; just needs to take a broader shot at its target!
Prose and formatting: 8 generally well-written, easy to follow. Latin names-- well, a little more subtlety would suit me, but might strike others another way. The more multisyllabic and pretentious the writing, though, I think the funnier the article would be-- particularly when you're speaking of trailer trash!
Images: 10 magnificent job. That Flava Flav pic, in particular, was a serious crack-up. :)
Miscellaneous: 10 good balance of text and pics, flows well... just think about taking more well-deserved potshots at the target, and might want to toss in the odd thing about Bush as well (always a chuckle).
Final Score: 43 th...th...th... that's all folks! Hope it helps-- very solid start you're working with there. :)
Reviewer: --Mong 11:48, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
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