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SadisticWolf 17:48, May 17, 2010 (UTC) you'll need this for this one. pass key is at the top of the article.

Humour: 10 Wow awesome article! I can totally comprehend what RWy'1Y bb26 means! However, I do believe the section on up6fClf84SK+ is too short. Maybe you could expand it by stressing more on aj5jAjnE. What you're doing now is simply making random comments on 4jK3l'3', which makes me laugh. But you can make it better if you revolve around the concept of aj5jAjnE.
You just took random parts of the article for that. Rwy'1Y bb26 means it's got, fail. --SadisticWolf 17:52, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
Concept: 10 Perfect concept. Totally. Its awesome.
Prose and formatting: 10 Perfect grammar and everything, but putting a quote at the first section of the article isn't really good. Also, you made a punctuation error in the fifth line. You forgot to put the comma. And that is BAD
Images: 5 No images. But there's imagery! So I award you 5 here.
Miscellaneous: 8.8 averaged
Final Score: 43.8 awesome article.
Reviewer:    zheoliel   17:43 June 4
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