Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Alberto Gonzalez Runs for President

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edit User:Narf, the Wonder Puppy/Alberto Gonzalez Runs for President

I'm not done, but all I have to add is Straight Man parts and an image. --Narf, the Wonder Puppy/I support Global Warming and I'm 100% proud of it! 05:48, 16 September 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 3 I like the original better. This isn't really funny, simply focusing on the fact he's hispanic.
Concept: 3 Having an hispanic run for president isn't a good concept. Bill Richardson, hispanic, is running for President at the same time. I'd stick with the original concept but still, I'd rewrite.
Prose and formatting: 5 I'm no grammar teacher, so you might want to put {{Proofread}} at the bottom of the article. This needs formatting help, as I said before, take a look at The UnNews articles in this category and see how they write
Images: 0 Sorry pal, you need images. The image I suggested last time probably should be placed on this article, or make a request at UN:PIC
Miscellaneous: 4 This is not written in a proffesional manner, you really should read HowTo:Tune up an UnNews article
Final Score: 15 This really has potential, this could be great if you write in a proffesional mannre and take a look at the link above, good luck.
Reviewer: --Sir Manforman CUN 13:37, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
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