Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Alaska (2)

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this article was placed on VFH when it wasn't finished. i stuck it back in the microwave for about 45 seconds, i think it's done now. my questions to you, potential reviewer, are the following: which parts are too long, too short, or lack humor? how can it be improved? most importantly, is it VFH-ready? as always, free prize for all reviewers. --SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 22:58, 14 November 2007 (UTC)

I wholeheartedly approve. The first part seems a bit disjointed to me, but from there on out it's A+ material. I especially liked the parts about Geography and Mooseocracy. The Pictures and captions were also great. --Komodo Gallant 02:29, 21 November 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 8.8 The humor is spot-on, and isn't random. You took limited resources (it's a state!) and did excellently on the funny business. I especially like where you point out that it seems to move around the map.
Concept: 7.9 Well, it's about a state, but you did a great job with it.
Prose and formatting: 8.9 Everything looked good to me. Nothing seemed to drag on, but I don't mind reading, myself. Especially since it was so funny.
Images: 8.5 Your use of images was relavant and funny, and you had witty captions.
Miscellaneous: 8.3 Average of the other scores.
Final Score: 42.4 You have a real winner on your hands. I'd nominate this if I knew how.
Reviewer: Crazee Boy, OMGLOL FURRY

Just a few comments. I'm pretty generous and easy to amuse, but ask anyone, and I bet they'd tell you that this article is excellent. Also, where is my prize!?

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