Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Al Capone

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Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 04:00, 20 February 2008 (UTC)

Another guy to add to my to-do list (lol). This one could be a toughie ^_^ --User:Fag/sig2 10:44, 3 March 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 7 I laughed 7 times, which is actually a pretty good rate, for me.
Concept: 7 I think you bled all the jokes that could have been gotten out of this subject. Doesn't make you go, "Why didn't I think of that?" exactly, but still pretty good subject for ridicule, now that he's dead and can't kill us all anymore.
Prose and formatting: 8 Good writing for the most part. The gangsta names got a bit repetitive, and I was a little disappointed none of them were named something like "Little Mik'" or "Master Fat" or some such, but all in all, not bad at all.
Images: 8 I can't think of any better images for this than the ones you used. Nothing brilliant, however, just servicable images.
Miscellaneous: 8 This article kept me off-balance enough to make me laugh more often than I usually do. It's certainly worthy of a vote, which is why I'm about to take it to VFH now.
Final Score: 38 As a whole, it feels crisp and clean and is definitely worth a read. Not sure if it's VFH quality, as there's nothing that stands out especially about the piece, but it's a solid bit of humor that's worthy of at least a look at the great vote up in the sky.
Reviewer: --<<Bradmonogram.png>> 15:47, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Sorry, fag. You took too long with this one.--<<Bradmonogram.png>> 15:47, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

He's been doing that quite a bit recently, actually. --SirU.U.Esq. VFH | GUN | Natter | Uh oh | Pee 15:55, Mar 19
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