Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Adventure Time

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Snicklin 22:15, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I got this! Espect a review in 24 hours or less.--User:Jokerman/sig 01:44, April 10, 2011 (UTC)
Humour: 4 You gotta admit, these new Cartoon Network shows suck. You could ridicule this show for its general suckiness here, and you could have some winning jokes here. Sadly, there were only a few jokes I found funny here. There is so much more to write on Adventure Time that isn't here. Perhaps poke fun at the main character's infatuation and the simplicity of the storyline? If you analyze this crappy show, I am certain you will come up with more material.
Concept: 7 A TV article on one of these new shows CN grunted out due to burnout and loss of creativity. It is a decent concept and I applaud your effort. Just analyze the show more rather than describing the characters.
Prose and formatting: 7 There are no glaring spelling/grammar/prose formatting errors I noticed, and I have studied the English Language quite a bit. Uncyc is an encyclopedia satire, and it looks like an encyclopedia article.
Images: 4 Your article needs another image or two. The first one was okay. The second one was pretty funny. I would recommend another like that. Just try to make it amusing.
Miscellaneous: 5.3 My grade of the overall article.
Final Score: 27.3 This is my first Pee Review and I hope this insight helped you a bit. I assume you are also new. You got a decent article here and you just need to fix it up. You should also expand the piece at least a bit. Also look at that HTBFANJS if you haven't (I just did!) and some good articles on other TV shows. If you have any questions or you wanna scream at me for giving you a crappy review, contact me at my talk page. Good luck making future stuff.
Reviewer: --User:Jokerman/sig 20:13, April 10, 2011 (UTC)
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